nklpikl Posted March 24, 2008 #1 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Please take a look at the wording and help me out. We want to include my children in the invitation. They are 6,9, and 11. We like the opening saying. We like the play on embarking and voyage. But something is not right. Thanks for your help. We are so happy that the man who makes our mom's eyes sparkle,who makes her laugh and sing,who loves her and us very muchis joining our family! Karyssa, Makenna and Jocelyn XXXXinvite you to share their joyas their motherNicole XXXXXXXXandJohn XXXXXXXXXXXembark on life's greatest voyage togetherjoining their lives in marriage aboardThe Carnival Sensationon Thursday, the nineteenth of June Two thousand and eightat ten o'clock in the morningPort Canaveral, Florida Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalblue0610 Posted March 24, 2008 #2 Share Posted March 24, 2008 I think that sounds great:D congrats. I like the kids part at the beginning and the "embarking on life's greatest voyage" cute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mara93 Posted March 25, 2008 #3 Share Posted March 25, 2008 What you have is excellent!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PMO Posted April 9, 2008 #4 Share Posted April 9, 2008 I agree, it's perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fantasy_Bride Posted April 9, 2008 #5 Share Posted April 9, 2008 It looks good to me as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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