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If you could write a new promo for HAL


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What if you received a call from Seattle (cmon and play along) asking you to write a new promo for HAL.

 

What catchy phrase would you try come up with to "grab hold" of the reader?

 

How bout "When you step aboard, you're our guest, not just a passenger"

 

What are your thoughts?

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I read this sentence here on this Board last week and it caught my fancy...... Sorry to the Original Poster as I do not remember the name. It was something like:

 

"I've unpacked, attended Life Boat Drill, Let the Pampering Begin!!!"

 

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"Elegance and style, prompt service with a smile, that's Holland America"

 

Thanks for the compliment, Sail7Seas. Here's the tagline you were looking for:

 

 

That's It!!! I love your tagline. Thanks for ID'ing yourself. I didn't remember who wrote it.

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Well, if I were to get a call from HAL/ Seattle, I would be expecting it to be to offer me an upgrade for our cruise next week. After peeling myself off the ceiling and finding out that it is a question about how they should run a promo and not an offer of an upgrade...I'm not so sure they would get the type answer they expected.

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